On that terrible day, the visitors of the city saw a man, a man like no other. No king on Earth was adorned in such splendour. His skin had a soft glow as if its defining lines were smudged with white chalk. He was visiting one of the temples. As he ascended up the stairway, the gleaming ends of his cloak waved, simulating the movement of a pendulum. His hair was sky blue and extended past the arch of his back, the penetrating sunlight in-between its strands made his hair comparable to glints on burnished silver.
“Sagara!” echoed a clean, regal voice, resounding through in the sanctuary.
A gravelly tone resonated from within the muscular sculpture of Poseidon.
“My Lord Teki. Have you come to observe the labour of my hands? The tillers have called it the great city of the gods. They call it Atlantis.”
The rings of Teki’s pupils ignited as he slashed the air with a swing of his hand. “Enough! This great city is about to fall. I have come to station you to a land in the East.”
A guttural grumble came from the crafted image, the sounds of fine dust being pressed and scraped against the smooth floor. A stumble upon words as shock gripped its bearer: “Atlantis… Destroyed? But, how?”
Teki raised his voice, speaking with haste. “Who is strong enough to oppose the Gods?”
A fine white powder fell to the floor as a hairline fracture ripped down the face of the statue. “Impossible! The Great One? H-he is here… In Atlantis?”
Teki clawed his hand in frustration, a wave of energy flowed down his body, and his hair began to illuminate. “He has been seen walking the lands of the mortals not far from here. It will not be long. Summon the other gods at once and depart.”
Another crack formed at the wheel of the statue’s chariot and crept up to join the fracture on the face. “I cannot fathom why the Great One would visit the lands of the Earth. Why would he come to Atlantis? It has taken my worshippers years to build this city.”
Teki clenched his fists. The skin on his nose wrinkled as his upper lip lifted to display his radiant white teeth. “You have been counselled against drawing his attention by the other lords. The people here have initiated too many wars and, so, you have slanted the scales of justice.”
“But even that does not warrant a visit from him,” said Sagara.
“Either way, if you all are here when he arrives, you are aware of the consequences.”
“The Great One is not a man that he should take a stroll. Something is misplaced. We must find out what the purpose is for his visit, or he could just appear anywhere in the world and abolish all our kingdoms. What of Olympus?”
“We will find out, but for now, go to the East. There is a vast land there, and it is revealed in the Everplanes that the tillers are destined to become a great nation. I will visit the temple and take the Warden of Atlantis, so that you may subdue your new land with famine.” A spinning wheel of fire materialised above Teki’s head.
An aura of smoke started to hover from the sculpture. “Your crown has manifested!”
Teki scowled at his hands. The Crown of the Origins was an uncontrollable part of his being that always appeared when the Great One was nearby. “He is already here!” said Teki, lifting the tone of his voice. “Make haste!”
A ferocious wind interrupted them, forcing itself upon the land, and the din of screaming people followed almost instantly. Teki wasted no more time and departed for the temple.
On that day, there were reports from mortal eyewitnesses on the outskirts of the city. They said that the man of splendour crowned with fire journeyed into the temple and acquired the precious Jewel of Atlantis.
The animals in the city could sense something that no man or woman could detect. It was instinct, an undetectable event that triggered them, and the beasts stampeded out of the city into the surrounding hills.Those wise enough to escape only did so by following the beasts.
They say the statues of Atlantis crumbled and came to life that day. The skins of rock cracked and shelled like thin walls of struck slate. Colossal glowing men broke free, and their images disintegrated into the atmosphere.
The priests of the temples shouted to the people, “We are doomed, even the Gods are fleeing!” The sky was almost as orange as liquefied rock, and cinders swirled up into the receiving firmament. A dense heat was rising from the ground, and Atlantis became hidden within a barricade of heat shimmer.
To the west, three shrouded men walking in a flawless triangular formation approached the gates and nonchalantly sauntered through the commotion into the city’s centre. They were no taller than six feet. They stood in the centre of the city in all its terror and removed their shrouds. They had the faces of young men—mid-thirties, immaculate skin—with blank expressions. Their long frost-white hair whipped, exposing the presence and strength of the wind.
The man furthest to the left was well built and had golden eyes that burned like a trail of shooting stars. His extensive sideburns dropped to the inner part of his shoulders, his skin was as fair as ivory, and he had features that resembled the peoples of Europe. The man in the middle had a slim physique with strong Asian features. His eyes were green like emeralds, and the glints on their surface moved as though the winds of the Earth were bound within them. The third man had blue-violet eyes that moved like the great oceans of the world, and his skin was more of a walnut brown and resembled those in the land of Africa. Their skin suddenly ignited into an animated shimmer.
“Atlantis!” the man with the green eyes spoke. His mouth barely parted, but his penetrating voice surrounded the city and subdued the wind. The atmosphere calmed, and the people paused to listen to the three strangers. “What is this thing that you have done?”
The golden-eyed figure lifted his head and continued as the green-eyed man finished, his tone raucous. “I have surveyed the Earth and have found no land that offends me more than Atlantis!”
The last man stepped forward. “Why does justice call to me from the wilderness, and why does the blood of the lands testify against you? Why does the heavens accuse you of misdeeds?” His strident tone was different but just as frightening.
The people were bewildered; these men looked and spoke strangely. The city was not aware of what was taking place, who these men were, or what they had come for.
“For this thing. I will wipe you off the Earth, and it will be as if you have never been!” thundered all three men at once.
The man with the emerald eyes blew into the air, and a typhoon spun from the breath that escaped his lips. The man with eyes of gold stared into the sky and beckoned the stars to fall to the Earth. Not long after, a small spark twinkled and shattered across the ether as an army of comets followed to breach the land. Boulders of celestial fires reduced the temples and the homes to ashes and rubble. The third man fell to one knee, using the sides of his hand to part the dust on the ground before him. The land suddenly quivered and ripped far apart. The blackened fissures gurgled as the waters of the deep climbed to fill the cracks. The man scowled at the waters and tall geysers. Like the pointed fingers of accusation, the geysers randomly burst from the grounds and thrusted against the sky. With a gesture of the hand, he beckoned the waters, and they began to swallow the terrain. The land tilted, and the people shouted words of distress. Across the land, legs were spread wide apart as the people endeavoured to balance themselves, but the land continued to shift here and there, and they fell to the ground.
Surrounding nations far away witnessed the diadem of destruction above the waters of where Atlantis once was.
By sundown, the land of Atlantis was no more, just a wide ocean of beating waves that reflected the celestial majesty of the shimmering aurora.
Visit, Let the Earth Tremble
Copyright © J.J Sylvester 2016
May 31, 2016 at 8:06 am
I really like the images you’ve used in your posts, also I liked your writing style 🙂
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May 31, 2016 at 8:08 am
Thank so much, Aki. It means a lot and helps build the writer’s spirit, lol.
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May 31, 2016 at 8:09 am
You are welcome:)
June 4, 2016 at 2:19 pm
Astounding and mentally stimulating!
A gripping tale of a world fundamentally different and yet so similar to our own
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June 4, 2016 at 6:50 pm
Thank you Charlotte. The series is a fiction based in a real world with fantasy ideas. It incorporates some of history to blend in with the plot.
June 7, 2016 at 1:24 am
The three strange men are indeed powerful and could let the earth tremble! I wonder how it would be if it ever happens in the real world? I also like your writing style, which combines fiction, fantasy and history; the descriptions are vivid and plant the images in a reader’s mental mind. Keep it up Sylvester; you will produce more great stories!
June 8, 2016 at 2:08 pm
I love your writing, it’s truly amazing. I think so many writers struggle with getting the picture across without explicitly saying it, but your writing is just like watching a movie and I’m really able to feel the emotions all the characters do. In addition to that, the story itself is so interesting and doesn’t feel overly fantasy-ish, which I like. It feels much more real than that and something that could maybe actually happen. I also love the way you explore each character in such a sort space.
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June 11, 2016 at 8:05 pm
Hats off. I’m an aspiring writer myself, and when I see such masterpiece that I totally recommend to others, I always congratulate the writer. Such detail, such vision, such development of the characters. This tale was a pure reading pleasure. I will follow this website for future postings.
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June 11, 2016 at 8:36 pm
Really interesting and fast read. Great job on going into the detail. You should feel proud of yourself, this is a small piece of pure genius. Would share and recommend Let the Earth Tremble to my friends and family